Writing for love is a pas

Hehehe this is wonderful! I loved it when Andy punched Peter! Oh, and I love the sudden interest in Red...This definately has me hooked! can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi again!! =] I really need help! If you could look at this.... Thanks so much!!

Wow. So this was a realy great second chapter. You portrayed everything in an understandable way, and we got a little detail about o la la Peter. =] So I'll ...

Heheheheh great second chapter. I don't have any nit-picks, so I'm going to run to the other chapters. *PEACEE* _Writing for love is a passion_

I loved it. =] It's really sad that she got hit by another car, but a coma is kinda......drastic. I know that's what everyone else said, but I'm just putting ...

Wow I thought that this was amazing. It was like I was there. The ending was really great. I think you should do a sequal. =] *PEACEE* _Writing for love ...

And you face is the only thing on my mind. You hands are the only things on my skin. I wish you would never leave. My worst fears? Losing you. ...

Wow. So I loved it. I think you MC could use so more developing. Maybe you could go into detail about everything more, eh? It seemed kind of rushed to ...

Wow. I didn't realize I had so many errors. Thanks for telling me. I changed it up a little, and made it longer. And yes, my parents do hate him, ...

***Before he moves**** And I love you because of all the little things you do. The way you're always there for me, even when we aren't together. The way your ...

That.....was......GREAT! It was so freakin hilarious, I cried from laughing so hard!

Ha I gold starred youu =]

Wow. I liked this a lot. I think in the first couple of lines you could use a more powerful beginning. But that's just me. Otherwise, I really did like ...

OK, so this was great. I just think that your rhyming got into the way of your full potential. I know i hate it when people say that to me, ...

Wow so this was really good. Your rhythm was choppy there for awhile....that would be my only complaint. I really liked the river part though, I connected to that. And ...